planning blog: script and shooting script

 scene 1

bully 1 : look who came running 

bully 2 & 3 : *laugh*

victim: *comes walking in to bully 1*

bully 1: oh so you think you're better than me? *pushes the victim to the floor* that is where you belong

minayah bring me it now 

bully 2 (minayah) : okay *she brings an eyebrow razor*

bully 1: I wonder how sharp this razor is I want to test it before doing my eyebrows hmm Alex do you mind testing this for me? *evily smiles*

victim (Alex) : please no i'm begging you

bully 1: aw guys should we pity her?

bully 1 & 2 : *laugh*

bully 1: alright lets see * she starts dragging the razor on her arms*

victim (alex): *groans while screaming* please stop * she then slaps her arm and then runs*

bully 1: oh so now she wants to act brave girls go fetch her

scene 2: 

victim (alex) : that was close

bully 1: not so fast girls hold her down

victim (alex): im begging you don't hurt me i beg 

*alex gets knocked out* 

she hears blurred out noise while everything spins and turns black

Alex wake up in a bed gasping really loud while all sweating and breathing really fast

Alex : i will show them all

she smiles creepily




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